| Re: a comment on AIDS Bonanza! by -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. |
12-Sep-02/9:27 AM |
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VERY GOOD I NEVER SAW IT COMING
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| Re: a comment on AIDS Bonanza! by -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. |
12-Sep-02/9:22 AM |
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"I think it has a show there, you know"?
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| Re: Epitome of Pathetic by royalflesh |
12-Sep-02/7:26 AM |
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I think you've been reading too many lyrics.
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| Re: a comment on Unfortunate Semen Incident by -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. |
11-Sep-02/6:54 PM |
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From my point of view, it's "Milwaukee" that doesn't quite fit the rhyme. "Hierarchy" has a silent "r" when pronounced in the Queen's English.
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| Re: want it by sontei |
11-Sep-02/6:44 PM |
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Expand upon the second stanza. I am intrigued as to how the suggestion of nudity pans out!
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| Re: a comment on want it by sontei |
11-Sep-02/6:43 PM |
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"Arse" rhymes with "grass" in sunny England. AAAAHsssssssssss. GRAaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaassssss.
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| Re: a comment on AIDS in a Glass by -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. |
11-Sep-02/2:01 PM |
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If you really want to know, everything should rhyme with 'arse', which works if you have a British accent. If you can't cope with that, try a Boston accent instead. You obviously think 'Lars' should be pronounced with a 'z' sound, but that's not true. In fact, I seem to recall that indigenously it should be pronounced more like 'larsh', which suggests reading the entire poem in a Sean Connery voice.
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| Re: a comment on Milk & Honey with a touch of PCP <the dead cat edit> by horus8 |
11-Sep-02/10:00 AM |
1. I didn't give you a three. Good try, though!
2. Haven't we been over this before? Last time I actually counted, fewer than 1/7 of my poemes made ANY REFERENCE to faeces at all. Yet this still seems to be the thrust of all your attacks and counterattacks. em erob uoy.
3. Don't you have anything to say in your defense? Can you do naught but fling tiresome accusations of fecal obsession?
4. Actually, you do come over to "my side" and "mess with me". Anyway I *am* letting you do what you do, you fanny. It's called CONSTRUCTIVE CRITICISM. I made a suggestion. If you're too much of a man to consider it then I guess you win.
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| Re: The Writing Life by poetandknowit |
11-Sep-02/9:40 AM |
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I feel that the "#3" really adds a true taste of the writer's life. Excellent work.
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| Re: At the Olde Absinthe by Limness |
11-Sep-02/9:23 AM |
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| Re: Milk & Honey with a touch of PCP <the dead cat edit> by horus8 |
11-Sep-02/9:20 AM |
Well fuck me, it's another 20-page drug-addled discharge from the master of meaningless crypticism. Great one! I'm sure all your fans will come all over it!
I used to actually try to understand what the hell you were talking about. But there is far too much random bullcrap to bother trying to glean the nuggets of wisdom you seem to think you have. I bet if you shortened your public therapy sessions by about 70% a lot more people would be willing to actually read them and take them seriously. And so sayeth -=Plumpkin=-.
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| Re: Gone Away by Christof |
11-Sep-02/9:13 AM |
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I would like this poeme more if you didn't capitalise all the words at the beginning of a line. It makes it seem 10 times more portentous than it actually is. Also, the second verse is unpleasant to read.
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| Re: Pigeons by Limness |
11-Sep-02/9:04 AM |
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Old man with paper bag feeding pigeons. Did you make that up yourself?!?!?!?!?!?1?!/!?!/!11 also, I don't understand how "wakes him" follows from "st marks bells toll the matins". Is there supposed to be some sort of punctuation there?
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| Re: a comment on Putney at Low Tide by Christof |
11-Sep-02/9:01 AM |
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Stop commenting at the same time I am commenting. It makes it seem like we're the same person!!!!!!!!111
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| Re: a comment on Ever Felt by nightii |
11-Sep-02/7:12 AM |
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T. de la Bog, I have come to realise, is not a human but a commenting robot, whose ability to comment comes from a basic syntactic parser and 20 years sitting in his mother's high school poetry class.
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| Re: a comment on Putney at Low Tide by Christof |
11-Sep-02/3:30 AM |
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Dare to dream, Christof! Dare to dream! One day, you'll get to sniff that leotard. And when you do, you too will know the sweet smell of Victory.
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| Re: a comment on Putney at Low Tide by Christof |
11-Sep-02/2:19 AM |
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Of course it was shit. It takes years before rowing becomes even vaguely tolerable. It's a crap sport for novices. It's just too technically demanding to be much fun. For some reason, you always end up with one muppet (usually the one who thinks rowing in jeans is a splendid idea) who insists on rowing in anti-phase with everyone else. Tell me, Christof: Did you row in jeans? Or did you wear a leotard like everyone else?
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| Re: Putney at Low Tide by Christof |
10-Sep-02/9:57 AM |
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Who would have thought a poeme containing the word 'beshitten' could be so beautiful? NOT ME THAT'S FOR SURE!!!!!11 But seriously Christof, you couldn't make the first eight if your buttocks depended on it! Which, judging by their flabbiness, they obviously do. 10/10!
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| Re: a comment on My cousin's baby sitter. by Bachus |
10-Sep-02/8:35 AM |
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acetic: of, relating to, or containing acetic acid or vinegar. Sorry, dictionary boy, but your vocabulary isn't quite the national treasure you seem to think.
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| Re: a comment on Don't Wanna Know by nightii |
10-Sep-02/12:34 AM |
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Great use of the word 'prerogative'!!!111
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