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Don't Wanna Know (Free verse) by nightii I don't wanna know
'bout your pain and fears
Don't wanna know
'bout the things you hear
Don't wanna hear
'bout the things you do
I just wanna fuck you
Don't wanna know
When you're feelin' sad
Don't really care
If you're mood is bad
Don't wanna hear
That you're feelin' blue
I only wanna fuck you
I don't really care
If you bumped your head
I don't give a shit
if your dog is dead
Don't really care
if you got the flu
I'm just gonna fuck you.
Down the ladder:
Her Name was Lisa
Votes: (green: user, blue: anonymous)
Arithmetic Mean: 3.5
Posted: September 7, 2002 8:33 AM PDT; Last modified: September 7, 2002 8:33 AM PDTWeighted score: 4.5965877 Overall Rank: 12543 Comments:
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-=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. @ 217.39.63.83
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7-Sep-02/10:39 AM
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I bet you would care if they had AIDS. Think about THAT the next time you dine!
I'll have to go with dark angel on this one. You seem like some big perv.. But i also have to say if the words weren't so...rude, it would be a very nice poem. So i'll rate it as a 7
Oh. I see. AIDS isn't funny but treating women as fuck-objects is!? I'm sorry but I don't see anybody else laughing! You ought to have a long, hard think about what you've done. Did you know that 1 in every 2 persons is a woman? Women raise many important issues and I'll thank you not to speak of them in such casual tones. Good day to you, Sir!
I knew you were going to say that. For fuck's sake: you are a fucking man.
yes, I am. and apparently you have a problem with men. my statement still stands. Why do you stereotype? This could just as easily havve been written by a woman. I know many women who look at men the same way you say men look at women.
This was meant as a joke. Why do I even bother arguing with you about it when you obviously don't get it. Not everything HAS to be serious, or socially acceptable.
I think you'd better take a look at some REAL poetry, my lad. My masterpiece, AIDS in a Van, would be a splendid place to start. You'll find it in the 'Worst' section. Do have a lovely day!
Hyuk hyuk!! I guess you sure got me there! What was I thinking calling my poeme a "masterpiece" when it's in the "worst" section?!?! rofl asl?
katie: Would you mind addressing me as "-=Dark_Angel=-"? It's just that -- well, I went to the trouble of getting it legally changed, and it hurts when people don't put all the characters in it or abbreviate it. Thanks!
i thought the person in the nighti was usually the one that got fucked, perchance you strap it on for extra credit? change all the "i"s to young republican headed corporations, then go fuck yourself. and your boyfriend too. boo. 7/10!
Look, I have to side with Dark_Angel on this one. There's a fine line between kidding around and being downright insulting, and you haven't quite got the balance right. Better luck Next Time!
la la la test.
I see you've been censoring your poeme's comments. Great job! Keep it up!
Yes, I removed some of my replies as they were pointless. I did NOT censor anyone else's comments, or the poem itself. I do believe that is my perogative.
Great use of the word 'prerogative'!!!111
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