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Don't Wanna Know (Free verse) by nightii

I don't wanna know 'bout your pain and fears Don't wanna know 'bout the things you hear Don't wanna hear 'bout the things you do I just wanna fuck you Don't wanna know When you're feelin' sad Don't really care If you're mood is bad Don't wanna hear That you're feelin' blue I only wanna fuck you I don't really care If you bumped your head I don't give a shit if your dog is dead Don't really care if you got the flu I'm just gonna fuck you.

beakism 8-Sep-02/4:41 AM
Look, I have to side with Dark_Angel on this one. There's a fine line between kidding around and being downright insulting, and you haven't quite got the balance right. Better luck Next Time!




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