| regarding some deleted poem... |
21-Oct-03/9:48 AM |
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| regarding some deleted poem... |
22-Oct-03/6:50 AM |
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You are using the inclusion of some Spanish words as an excuse for a poeme that reads like shit and doesn't make any sense. 10!!!
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| Re: African Killer Bees, it's not the smell of smoke by <{Baba^Yaga}> |
22-Oct-03/6:55 AM |
[X] Arbitrary line breaks
[X] Devoid of rhyme
[X] Devoid of other linguistic embellishments (alliteration, etc)
[X] Devoid of other literary devices (metaphor, synaesthesia, etc)
[X] Devoid of wondrous or fantastical imagery
This isn't a poeme; it's another prose with arbitrary line breaks special.
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| Re: Oaxaca city fragment by poetandknowit |
22-Oct-03/8:20 AM |
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If by "birth" you mean nentwined's Haiku of the same name then I applaud the sentiment if not the frequent, and somewhat baffling, references to urban decay.
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| Re: Slayer Sucks by peaceseeker |
22-Oct-03/3:44 PM |
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I saw Slayer in Lon-Don during the summer. Afterwards, I witnessed a young South American man excitedly shaking his friend and shouting about how ace he thought the concert was. That cancels out all the dullards, dunces, posers, buncombes, oldsters, youngsters, hipsters, holsters, s'mores and sega rallys that you may have encountered.
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| Re: EGG by ?-Dave_Mysterious-? |
22-Oct-03/3:45 PM |
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In 1992 the acclaimed director Nicholas Novi presented Placido Domingo with his handmade egg, decorated with a portrait of Peter The Great.
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| Re: Indiana Jones and the Temple of 'shroom by SupremeDreamer |
23-Oct-03/2:49 PM |
Any of the following titles will be fine:
WHORE FORK
The mushroom that time forgot
Sweaty Confetti
The Lost Baptism II
Indiana Jones and the Temple of 'shroom
Shattered Illusions
Think before you beak
A Song For An Old Westminster Boy
Flames of Passion
Musings: Memory of Hope?
Beak Parade
The Mellifluos Sound of God: Musical Eden
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| Re: rainfall saga 1 by Bill Z Bub |
24-Oct-03/6:42 AM |
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Oh my, the locations of instances of 'rain' have similar properties to the locations of actual raindrops. INCREDIBLE!
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| Re: EarthWaterAir - Hey! Look! IM MR FIRE! by Y2kSlamPoet |
28-Oct-03/3:56 AM |
You're always banging on about parodies as if they're the most important things in the world and that you are some sort of parody-master. You're not a parody-master. You're a parody-witney. Clearly the novelty is taking a lot longer to wear off on you than it did on your forebears. Incidentally - and this may shock you - it wasn't horus8 who wrote the first poemeranker parody. It wasn't horus8 who came up with the idea of rewriting someone's beautiful work of art, replacing every second word with the word "nappy" (or similar). And it wasn't horus8 who came up with the idea of exaggerating the most pompous lines to the point of fotherington-overload. Guess who started the parody craze, my lad? (1 mark)
SupremeDreamer's Brain (parody) by -=Dark_Angel=-
Yes, parodies are so important! People shouldn't get angry because of my parodies - they should read them and learn from their mastakes. Horus8 has taught me so much about writing parodies, and now I like to think I know quite a bit about them! I'm not here just to piss people off - sure I might do that, but you can really learn a hell of a lot from my intelligent tomfoolery. Heck I'm a cool guy, I hang out, I take drugs and shit, and I'm creative with a great sense of humour. Why not just think of my parodies as an intelligent and witty form of constructive criticism; a mere reflection of your own piece of work. But not a straightforward reflection, I might add. I like to think of myself as a mirror that can reflect poetry fragments whilst simultaneously using my humour and creativity skills to highlight their poetic weaknesses. That's all I'm trying to do, and if that pisses you off then you're a fucking idiot.
Have a nice day.
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28-Oct-03/3:52 PM |
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| Re: Tiddles Breathes his Last by scitz |
29-Oct-03/6:22 AM |
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| Re: Belgium and rose tears by SupremeDreamer |
29-Oct-03/6:52 AM |
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| Re: A Fractured Egg Shell by newdawnfades |
29-Oct-03/8:50 AM |
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I love the way you've used an egg as a metaphor for life in general.
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| Re: Through Poetry by newdawnfades |
29-Oct-03/8:57 AM |
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Emotions are the fundamental building blocks that bind the spiritual, physical, mental and artistic realms. Without them, poetry and poverty become meaningless and are lost in the sands of time beneath the waves of hustle and bustle that break on the shores of our frantic modern lifestyles. I hope you agree with these sentiments, because I think your work sums them up beautifully. An excellent poeme. -10-
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| regarding some deleted poem... |
29-Oct-03/9:44 AM |
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You must have an actual mental disability to keep churning out exactly the same song over 30 times.
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| regarding some deleted poem... |
29-Oct-03/3:16 PM |
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I'm afraid for talentless cretins who have to write things in lower case to satisfy themselves that their worthless poetry is profound enough.
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| Re: The Santa Anna's fire and red sun by Bachus |
29-Oct-03/3:17 PM |
[X] Arbitrary line breaks
[X] Shit
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| Re: Love by EouSou |
29-Oct-03/3:19 PM |
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Excellent. Simply excellent. Hi, I'm -=Dark_Angel=-. I wonder if I could use this piece to help give feeling to a Stephen Hawking memorial Hallowe'en Extravaganza I'm throwing on Friday?
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| Re: Fading Freindships by BuffysBack419 |
29-Oct-03/3:24 PM |
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Amazing. Simply amazing. Hi, I'm -=Dark_Angel=-. This poem really speaks to me -- and I'm not just saying that!!1 How did you come up with the idea for this piece? I'm especially intrigued as to the meaning of the unconventional spelling of "friendships" in the title -- What are you saying here? That your friendships don't quite fit the conventional, mainstream definition? Excellent work -- 10!
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30-Oct-03/2:04 AM |
What the world needs now
Is gloves sweet gloves
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