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Fading Freindships (Free verse) by BuffysBack419 School starts,
Old friendships fade,
Like memories of later days,
Miss the people you love and trust,
People warned you that this would happen,
You thought your friendships were strong,
No it would never happen to you,
But it did.
It still hurts,
As you watch your friends drift slowly away,
You look one last time into the pool of memories,
Shed one last tear,
And walk away.
Up the ladder:
Pele's heart is now your's
Down the ladder:
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Posted: October 29, 2003 1:42 PM PST; Last modified: October 29, 2003 1:42 PM PSTWeighted score: 5.179294 Overall Rank: 4839 Comments:
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-=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. @ 131.111.8.98
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29-Oct-03/3:24 PM
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Amazing. Simply amazing. Hi, I'm -=Dark_Angel=-. This poem really speaks to me -- and I'm not just saying that!!1 How did you come up with the idea for this piece? I'm especially intrigued as to the meaning of the unconventional spelling of "friendships" in the title -- What are you saying here? That your friendships don't quite fit the conventional, mainstream definition? Excellent work -- 10!
I think you are wrong. Freindshpis never die!!!!1
Stunning. This piece works really well when recited in a heavy Indian accent. -10-
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