Re: Family by ramtheman1	18-Oct-03/4:02 AM
I can't believe it! It's amazing that you mention a special crown for good families, because in my town that's exactly what we have! Every year, the mayor selects five outstanding families from the town and awards them the Family Prize for friendship, love and courage. This year my family was one of the five! We don't get a crown exactly, but we do get a special medal that we're allowed to wear on special occassions. I guess it's kinda similar to your crown idea! I love my family. -10-
Re: Halloween by ramtheman1	18-Oct-03/4:43 AM
Chillingly delightful! I especially enjoyed the whimsical spasm of joy I underwent upon reading "Knowing that you don't live in an ark". Of course, the price is another four hours of unimaginable agony as my crippled body jerks back and forth within my cruel Wheeled-chair of its own volition, but I daresay it's worth it! 10!!
regarding some deleted poem...	18-Oct-03/4:53 AM
[_] AABB rhyming scheme [_] About drugs [X] About romantic love [_] About writing [X] About suicide or self-mutilation [_] About the author's social pastimes [_] Arbitrary indentation [X] Arbitrary line breaks [_] Autobiographical but written in the third person [_] Clerical errors [X] Clichéd imagery (gazing out of window, tears falling like rain) [_] Clichéd rhymes (love/above, heart/apart) [X] Clichéd angst words (putrid, wretched) [X] Devoid of rhyme [X] Devoid of other linguistic embellishments (alliteration, onomatopoeia) [_] Devoid of other literary devices (simile, synaesthesia) [_] Devoid of wondrous or fantastical imagery [_] Ellipses used overabundantly [_] Insipidly whimsical or zany [_] Internet shorthand or emoticons [_] Leaving rant [_] Lower case only [_] 'Lyrics' [X] Melodramatic [X] Naively religious or superstitious [_] Obsessed with femininity [_] Pointedly unanswered questions [_] Rage against the machine [X] Repetition of a word or phrase to the point of nausea [_] Sanctimonious [X] Self-obsessed [X] Sentimental [_] Smugly-named protagonist [X] Thesaurophilia [_] Untitled [X] Vicarious wish fulfilment -14-
Re: Torment by ThoughtfulSoul	18-Oct-03/5:09 AM
Splendid!
Re: September 11, 2001: That Day by blues361	18-Oct-03/3:59 PM
In what way was "history different forever"? Did the events of September 11th 2001 alter the past? No. Or perhaps you mean that history on September 12th 2001 was different from that on September 10th 2001 because it contained the events of the 11th. But that would have been the case whatever happened. In conclusion, you're an idiot.
regarding some deleted poem...	19-Oct-03/11:08 AM
So what you're saying is that you have a series of moral principles which determine your behaviour, but then you reveal that the only reason for following them is the practical concern of avoiding a stroke.
Re: You'd sell more hats, mugs, and shirts if they said... by Shardik	19-Oct-03/1:44 PM
MEDIOCRITY CODE: 30C90421 http://www.mycgiserver.com/~prawne/mediocre.jsp
regarding some deleted poem...	19-Oct-03/1:50 PM
The first verse is quite good. Shut up about your fucking pans.
regarding some deleted poem...	19-Oct-03/1:55 PM
BC540040
Re: broken by GekoHawaii	19-Oct-03/2:00 PM
9054F003 Truly shit.
Re: Out of Line by dragonfly	19-Oct-03/2:07 PM
20F00020
regarding some deleted poem...	19-Oct-03/2:13 PM
A writer's block poeme! How exciting and novel!! 20D12081
regarding some deleted poem...	19-Oct-03/2:25 PM
So, so perfect. 21F42421
regarding some deleted poem...	19-Oct-03/2:33 PM
Super Duper 9054B101
Re: I'm going back to art school by TanHand	19-Oct-03/2:52 PM
I enjoyed this poeme so much that I read the whole thing.
Re: You'd sell more hats, mugs, and shirts if they said... by Shardik	19-Oct-03/3:54 PM
P.S If you are suggesting that -=Dark_Angel=- has been voting on his own poemes in a mindless attempt to top the best list you are mistaken. Nevertheless, I do get the feeling that as of late *somebody* has been smearing my felchings with more than their fair share of anonymous votes. I do not know who. But even if I had been voting on my own secretions (which I haven't), that would merely add to the credibilty of my scores because my voting algorithm is about ten times less wrong and stupid than the average poemeranker's.
Re: Not M.A.Y. by Yatasuma	19-Oct-03/4:52 PM
8054F081
Re: Drug Addict by SupremeDreamer	20-Oct-03/6:07 AM
34C02011 -8-
Re: Decay by INTRANSIT	20-Oct-03/7:06 AM
"Rusty Hull-ed ship carries disease Rusty shopping cart beggar on his knees" You may omit the rest.
regarding some deleted poem...	20-Oct-03/2:37 PM
Quite good.