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Out of Line (Free verse) by dragonfly
It's been but a few days since darling welcomed my resting head in his lap and already reality has pulled me back How dare I wear this smile so arrogantly I was out of line, but thank you for putting me in my place I don't know what came over me What convinced me into believing I was owed something a long time coming

Down the ladder: Johnny Neurotic

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Arithmetic Mean: 8.75
Weighted score: 6.00853
Overall Rank: 1252
Posted: October 18, 2003 11:13 PM PDT; Last modified: October 18, 2003 11:13 PM PDT
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[n/a] -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. @ 131.111.212.215 | 19-Oct-03/2:07 PM | Reply
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