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Out of Line (Free verse) by dragonfly It's been but a few days
since darling welcomed my resting head in his lap
and already reality has pulled me back
How dare I wear this smile so arrogantly
I was out of line, but thank you
for putting me in my place
I don't know what came over me
What convinced me into believing
I was owed something a long time coming
Up the ladder:
Johnny Neurotic
Down the ladder:
Dissenting voice
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Posted: October 18, 2003 11:13 PM PDT; Last modified: October 18, 2003 11:13 PM PDTWeighted score: 6.00853 Overall Rank: 1251 Comments:
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