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Out of Line

Member since 2002 · Posted 18 Oct 2003 · 1 comment

It's been but a few days since darling welcomed my resting head in his lap and already reality has pulled me back How dare I wear this smile so arrogantly I was out of line, but thank you for putting me in my place I don't know what came over me What convinced me into believing I was owed something a long time coming

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[n/a] -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. 19-Oct-03/2:07 PM Reply
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