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The Santa Anna's fire and red sun (Free verse) by Bachus
An eerie red filters through
windows, people, pets & wild things
I haven't seen the sky in two weeks
The mountains that I was born under
are as black as coal with a million
crucifixes and lonely chimneys still
holding onto something underneath
three feet of ash and two hundred
years of burnt pine fodder and brush.
The creeks and rivers I fished as a boy
run mud brown and molasses slow.
A fire camp prisoner sits on a boulder
overlooking the San Gabriel Valley
and his possible run to freedom.
But all would see his get away.
Just as all can see the flame beast
racing unhindered towards Big Bear.
11,000 firefighters many of which
are prison inmates trained for this.
Hand in hand with freemen and victims
The ones that serve their time won't
even be able to become firefighters
in the free world due to their record.
Killers against a truer killer.
Rapists against a truer rapist.
This fire has no heart.
This wind tells it so.
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Arithmetic Mean: 6.894737
Weighted score: 6.8048773
Overall Rank: 395
Posted: October 29, 2003 2:13 PM PST; Last modified: October 29, 2003 2:13 PM PST
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Good capture. Even in LA it looks like the fucking apocalypse, I can't imagine being at the place where the heart of the fire would be (if it had one).
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