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Indiana Jones and the Temple of 'shroom (Free verse) by SupremeDreamer
Think before you speak and use that mushroom of yours keep forgetting that, oh well. Thats ok, I'll remember when they bite and chew slow on my skin, forgetting now, where do I begin on this road again? So many forks, and theres no spaghetti no ones throwin confetti during my parade, oh well. Thats ok, I'll remember when they laugh and say nothing afterwards- keep the silence for me my friends, I've forgotten the sensation. Haven't gone to church since I was born and baptized, sure was surprised to discover this when I was ten. I remember, or have forgotten what was that you told me once again? ah yes, think before you speak use that mushroom of yours keep forgetting that.

Up the ladder: How Well I See
Down the ladder: Ode to the Bun

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Overall Rank: 2777
Posted: October 22, 2003 10:21 PM PDT; Last modified: October 22, 2003 10:21 PM PDT
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[n/a] The_Third_Isis @ | 22-Oct-03/11:31 PM | Reply
Don't you worry someone might read this?
[n/a] SupremeDreamer @ > The_Third_Isis | 23-Oct-03/6:34 PM | Reply
No, why should i?

if i was worried about it, would i post it?

[n/a] Johnnie Baptiste @ | 23-Oct-03/4:34 AM | Reply
How about calling it "Ode on the Mammoth Cheese Weighing over 7,000 Pounds"?
[5] -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. @ | 23-Oct-03/2:49 PM | Reply
Any of the following titles will be fine:

The mushroom that time forgot
Sweaty Confetti
The Lost Baptism II
Indiana Jones and the Temple of 'shroom
Shattered Illusions
Think before you beak
A Song For An Old Westminster Boy
Flames of Passion
Musings: Memory of Hope?
Beak Parade
The Mellifluos Sound of God: Musical Eden
[n/a] <{Baba^Yaga}> @ > -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. | 23-Oct-03/3:00 PM | Reply
Gocarts - The Magical Klute (AKA An Poosonic in opera able)

Starring Randy Flayed and Jane Wanda
Directed by Nicholaus Novi
[5] -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. @ > <{Baba^Yaga}> | 23-Oct-03/3:17 PM | Reply
I forgot to mention that all my titles are directed by Nicholas Novi.
[n/a] SupremeDreamer @ > -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. | 23-Oct-03/6:36 PM | Reply
ill grab "Indiana Jones and the Temple of 'shroom"

you people are very crafty with these titles..

skewl me.

[6] Jill Stockinger @ 0:0:0:0:0:0:0:1 | 2-Jan-21/6:34 PM | Reply
Shrooms! been a long time...
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