replying on Dovina & Co by amanda_dcosta
9 Nov 2006, 7:04 PM
The holiday was a good break and a great month. Family reunion after three years is a big blessing. Had a whale of a time, thank you. And, how are you?
on Dovina & Co by amanda_dcosta
6 Nov 2006, 6:50 PM
Hi everyone. Sorry for the silence, but I'm back now. Hope to see you all more often.
on A Scientistâs Prayer by Dovina
10 Oct 2006, 12:41 AM
D... this piece could do with some editing. Sorry for no vote as I need to read this well. Don't know when I'll get the time for that. I've just scanned through and thought it needed fixing. Am having a whale of a time in the gulf. Terribly hot though... but it's fun. Will try to check in when I can.
replying on Prayer by amanda_dcosta
17 Sep 2006, 9:22 PM
I'm glad there was some effect.
replying on Prayer by amanda_dcosta
17 Sep 2006, 8:51 AM
He said all I needed to know by just His presence of love.
replying on Prayer by amanda_dcosta
17 Sep 2006, 8:49 AM
D. I see here that you have changed the entire context of the subject. I didn't just wait on Him... I searched for him, I sought. Impact.
And again.. He quenched my questions of insecurities, doubts, fears, what ever I had been asking of him through His infilling of grace and love.
As you state in your last line... breaking the stillness of my heart, He did not break the stillness of my heart... He merely honored me with His presence when I waited on Him in silence and patience and meekness. He made my spirit stand in awe of Him.
And again.. He quenched my questions of insecurities, doubts, fears, what ever I had been asking of him through His infilling of grace and love.
As you state in your last line... breaking the stillness of my heart, He did not break the stillness of my heart... He merely honored me with His presence when I waited on Him in silence and patience and meekness. He made my spirit stand in awe of Him.
replying on Prayer by amanda_dcosta
17 Sep 2006, 8:41 AM
Thank you, half.italian.
Quenching and torrents of love and grace have been there on purpose. Quenching is to indicate that my soul was thirsting for His presence and I was filled..., and torrents of love and grace are to indicate that I was filled with his presence of love and grace... as simple as that.
Quenching and torrents of love and grace have been there on purpose. Quenching is to indicate that my soul was thirsting for His presence and I was filled..., and torrents of love and grace are to indicate that I was filled with his presence of love and grace... as simple as that.
on Farewell, Kind Lover by Dovina
15 Sep 2006, 7:43 PM
This is much better than your previous post. Anybody I know?
replying on Prayer by amanda_dcosta
15 Sep 2006, 7:37 PM
Geeee!!! Thanks.
on Flood Land, East Kentucky by zodiac
13 Sep 2006, 3:09 AM
Hey, hey zodiac. Good to see you back. PR's been missing you.
on Once they were gliders. by half.italian
10 Sep 2006, 8:51 AM
What is this about? Maybe I am too tired... or this has no meaning. If the latter, kindly excuse me.
on From Across the Line by Dovina
5 Sep 2006, 6:12 AM
Wow D. Looks like you haven't come up with something really really good in a long time until now. Cheers.
on Royal Blades by Dovina
4 Sep 2006, 12:59 PM
Hmmmmm , Nice scene..... and if only the poetry bunch could see her now? wow.
on Message sent by A_Dark_Calm
30 Aug 2006, 9:41 AM
I think the thirteenth line should read.. 'seem' instead of seemed. Apart from that.... it's beautiful.
And welcome to Poemranker.
And welcome to Poemranker.
on An All-American Fairy by Edna Sweetlove
22 Aug 2006, 6:51 AM
too prose-like.
on Me 2, Nature 0 by rnuk
22 Aug 2006, 6:49 AM
I wouldn't say that this was very impressive although you were trying to get a point across.
on Visiting My Heart by drnick
18 Aug 2006, 10:04 AM
Cooool. You gave me an eerie feeling reading this. Somehow I felt like vampire was about when you say
Outside the moon bleeds
with white light and mystery
and the sky remains black.
Outside the moon bleeds
with white light and mystery
and the sky remains black.
on The Pole and the Shadow by Dovina
18 Aug 2006, 9:57 AM
Very imaginative. Obedient to rules,
accurate in every respect,
shadows move under cars,
lurk in alleys,......
accurate in every respect,
shadows move under cars,
lurk in alleys,......