| Re: a comment on Dovina & Co by amanda_dcosta |
9-Nov-06/7:04 PM |
The holiday was a good break and a great month. Family reunion after three years is a big blessing. Had a whale of a time, thank you. And, how are you?
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| Re: Dovina & Co by amanda_dcosta |
6-Nov-06/6:50 PM |
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Hi everyone. Sorry for the silence, but I'm back now. Hope to see you all more often.
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| Re: A Scientistâs Prayer by Dovina |
10-Oct-06/12:41 AM |
D... this piece could do with some editing. Sorry for no vote as I need to read this well. Don't know when I'll get the time for that. I've just scanned through and thought it needed fixing. Am having a whale of a time in the gulf. Terribly hot though... but it's fun. Will try to check in when I can.
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| Re: a comment on Prayer by amanda_dcosta |
17-Sep-06/9:22 PM |
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I'm glad there was some effect.
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| Re: a comment on Prayer by amanda_dcosta |
17-Sep-06/8:51 AM |
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He said all I needed to know by just His presence of love.
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| Re: a comment on Prayer by amanda_dcosta |
17-Sep-06/8:49 AM |
D. I see here that you have changed the entire context of the subject. I didn't just wait on Him... I searched for him, I sought. Impact.
And again.. He quenched my questions of insecurities, doubts, fears, what ever I had been asking of him through His infilling of grace and love.
As you state in your last line... breaking the stillness of my heart, He did not break the stillness of my heart... He merely honored me with His presence when I waited on Him in silence and patience and meekness. He made my spirit stand in awe of Him.
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| Re: a comment on Prayer by amanda_dcosta |
17-Sep-06/8:41 AM |
Thank you, half.italian.
Quenching and torrents of love and grace have been there on purpose. Quenching is to indicate that my soul was thirsting for His presence and I was filled..., and torrents of love and grace are to indicate that I was filled with his presence of love and grace... as simple as that.
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| Re: Farewell, Kind Lover by Dovina |
15-Sep-06/7:43 PM |
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This is much better than your previous post. Anybody I know?
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| Re: Doubt by Dovina |
15-Sep-06/7:39 PM |
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D. Not very impressiveor. I've been reading this many times to come up with something constructive... but some how can't relate to it as you might like...sorry.
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| Re: a comment on Prayer by amanda_dcosta |
15-Sep-06/7:37 PM |
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| Re: Flood Land, East Kentucky by zodiac |
13-Sep-06/3:09 AM |
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Hey, hey zodiac. Good to see you back. PR's been missing you.
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| Re: Once they were gliders. by half.italian |
10-Sep-06/8:51 AM |
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What is this about? Maybe I am too tired... or this has no meaning. If the latter, kindly excuse me.
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| Re: From Across the Line by Dovina |
5-Sep-06/6:12 AM |
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Wow D. Looks like you haven't come up with something really really good in a long time until now. Cheers.
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| Re: Royal Blades by Dovina |
4-Sep-06/12:59 PM |
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Hmmmmm , Nice scene..... and if only the poetry bunch could see her now? wow.
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| Re: Message sent by A_Dark_Calm |
30-Aug-06/9:41 AM |
I think the thirteenth line should read.. 'seem' instead of seemed. Apart from that.... it's beautiful.
And welcome to Poemranker.
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| Re: Watcher by creepshow |
22-Aug-06/6:52 AM |
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too melancholy and depressing.
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| Re: An All-American Fairy by Edna Sweetlove |
22-Aug-06/6:51 AM |
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| Re: Me 2, Nature 0 by rnuk |
22-Aug-06/6:49 AM |
I wouldn't say that this was very impressive although you were trying to get a point across.
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| Re: Visiting My Heart by drnick |
18-Aug-06/10:04 AM |
Cooool. You gave me an eerie feeling reading this. Somehow I felt like vampire was about when you say
Outside the moon bleeds
with white light and mystery
and the sky remains black.
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| Re: The Pole and the Shadow by Dovina |
18-Aug-06/9:57 AM |
Very imaginative. Obedient to rules,
accurate in every respect,
shadows move under cars,
lurk in alleys,......
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