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The Pole and the Shadow (Free verse) by Dovina
A power pole shadow streaks the sidewalk, until the curb jags it like lightning, and pavement bends it like a sickle— portentous, foreshadowing. Obedient to rules, accurate in every respect, shadows move under cars, lurk in alleys, darken moon, darken night— ominous, definitive, satisfying interpretative minds with terrible creativity. And truth fades in another light, while trust is a bolt, holding cross arm to pole.

Up the ladder: Rescue Me
Down the ladder: Whispers to Isabelle

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Arithmetic Mean: 6.3333335
Weighted score: 5.1589375
Overall Rank: 5143
Posted: August 14, 2006 5:05 PM PDT; Last modified: August 14, 2006 5:05 PM PDT
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[9] amanda_dcosta @ 202.164.140.158 | 18-Aug-06/9:57 AM | Reply
Very imaginative. Obedient to rules,
accurate in every respect,
shadows move under cars,
lurk in alleys,......
[10] Crakyamuni @ 131.252.231.145 | 20-Aug-06/4:07 PM | Reply
This feels like lightning in a bottle/ pure soliloquy.
vibrant beautiful thank you
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