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Empty Sorrow (Free verse) by hummers86
Spinning too fast
Sometimes too slow
Choices bring about
Where we should go
Falling off is inevitable
Keeping straight is not easy
While steering the boat
With tides increasing
Some pain is for good
But usually is for bad
Though Controlling the anger
Reduces the sad
Too many times
The ones we love
Slip from our grasp
And fall from above
Torture taking affect
In consuming the weak
Spitting back broken hearts
Too constricted to speak
Tears flutter the sockets
Like windows they show
Peering into the soul
Causing nothing to grow
To reveal the scar
Can be pain full for some
Releasing new pulp
It then seals it to none
Fear coming for them
Various flavors to choose
Easy then unbearable
As there beginning to lose
An unsightly sight
But one still in view
You can sell out your aid
Till it sucks you through
When its time to let go
The mind stays unreal
So the body still lingers
For something to feel
Anguish comes to play
While embracing the hollow
Before the realize come
After the empty follow
In the end all is done
In the end all is gone
Then cutting your losses
You finally move on
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Arithmetic Mean: 6.3333335
Weighted score: 5.1589375
Overall Rank: 5158
Posted: November 18, 2003 6:15 PM PST; Last modified: November 18, 2003 6:15 PM PST
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