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Afterwards, when there's just you and the snow and the trees (Free verse) by somemorepoetry
We were there, wrapped tightly under
Leaves, watching as they marched
Through and past
Our well-fortified position.
"This one's a damn cripple
only got one leg," said the one.
"Well this one's more insect than
man," said the other, waving his hand
Back and forth before my eyes
A hesitating view of his
Black eyes pounded in like bullets
And his thick jowls built like hand grenades.
I counted them as they moved past
By the dozen, flitting from side to side,
Nesting and feeding, burrowing in -- little foxholes
In the cold, hard ground where they
Hoped their numbers would increase
Exponentially before their resources
Were overrun by the enemy.
Then they swarm out of the brush,
The last place you'd expect
Hidden by a few dabs of darkness
And a couple of twigs perfectly
Positioned across the whites of their eyes
Hit hard on all sides
Dashes now slashing through the air
Cutting hard into --
Cracking and splintering, becoming
Shards of ivory and burgundy wine
A feast where
The meat falls right off the bone.
"We can't stay now," said the one.
"Then what should we do with them?"
said the other.
Miles of roadmarkers
Hovering black clouds
Made of broken lines
Rather than full splashes --
Those fell on the ground,
Into pools and puddles and
Rivulets -- but don't you drink that,
Don't you touch that, you don't know
Where that's been --
It all freezes over by morning
When the snakes shiver
Beneath their stones and
The rabbits breathe slowly to conserve
Their energy for the Spring
"You remember Peter?" asks the one.
"Yeah, that Jewish kid. What about him?" asks the
other, grabbing a splintered handle
You could see shaking, blurred by
The distance where everything
Becomes double
Where breath is felt, not seen,
And cold hard presses against
Heavy breathing, swimming eyes,
Leaking into the powder where
You dropped, boots and all,
Thinking tomorrow I will go home
Then palms press against soil
Packed in by January
Shoulders ease up,
Toes uncurl,
Insides calm,
Eyes close
Close to remembering how
The strap goes under, then through --
The quarter must bounce --
The closer the better --
"Mmbff mfbnmf," says the one
"Mnbff bnffdbnmbf," says the other, muffled
through ages of the earth
Deer and hawks and cypress trees and
Antelope and mulberry and cabbage and
Whippoorwills and daffodils and
Bumblebees and Wooly Mammoths and
Salmon and fireflies and
More humans than Dallas, Texas.
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Posted: December 15, 2004 2:40 PM PST; Last modified: May 16, 2005 4:01 PM PDT
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