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A River Ran Through It (Free verse) by Dovina
When earth was flat and space a sphere
time flowed surely through it
upstream future, downstream past
evident as mighty Zeus
sensible as appleâs drop
Now the worldâs no longer flat
Zeus not quite the man
apples ride on waves
and time has all but stopped
Illusionsâpast and future
not a river really
but tingling on the brain
a handy way to sort things out
a filing drawer at best
Still, we feel the flattened land
walk as uninformed
each day and then the next
trusting gods and luck
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Weighted score: 5.1589375
Overall Rank: 5146
Posted: October 7, 2007 7:19 PM PDT; Last modified: October 7, 2007 7:19 PM PDT
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