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Message sent (Other) by A_Dark_Calm
My love is sent like a messenger pigeon
lifting from its perch upon my pen,
flying at first with indecision
till it senses its direction and then
it turns on faith and wings,
navigates with computer precision
past mountains, valleys, oceans and buildings.
No darkness, no storm will impede this mission.
Though wind may pull and tear at its plume,
though distance and time may seem so long,
though the hopes in the message may seemed doomed,
the messenger still carries on.
Its wings still beating strong.
And to my beloved is addressed a few words
tied by a string of hope, of prayer
that one day weâll have no need for these birds
for my love Iâll already be there.
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Arithmetic Mean: 6.75
Weighted score: 5.2086053
Overall Rank: 4524
Posted: August 28, 2006 12:37 PM PDT; Last modified: August 28, 2006 12:37 PM PDT
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The rest of the poem is fine :-)
The computer reference is sort of a give away.