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Doubt (Free verse) by Dovina
Ancient words, long preserved
of God whose doubt had turned pain
that what heâd made had made a flood
of evil men and nagging babes.
Noah was the only one,
with courage stood alone.
But knowing he was not alone,
he worked with plan in hand.
He wondered if they might be right,
the mockers on the desert sand.
With cypress wood, dimensions, tar,
he measured, sawed, and prayed.
Even when the flood subsided,
Noah had his doubts.
He got so drunk he cursed his son,
And thought he might need help.
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Arithmetic Mean: 5.0
Weighted score: 5.0
Overall Rank: 7780
Posted: September 10, 2006 4:07 PM PDT; Last modified: September 11, 2006 7:25 AM PDT
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