| Re: a comment on Flowers by Dovina |
8-Feb-07/10:08 AM |
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Hi D. What's all this with flower power? :-))
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| Re: a comment on Flowers by Dovina |
8-Feb-07/10:01 AM |
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Ha ha ha... you def are one optimistic guy. :-))))
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| Re: a comment on Flowers by Dovina |
8-Feb-07/9:47 AM |
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One of India's largest corporate concerns... Reliance Ltd. (Reliance Retail Ltd.) It's the company's new venture. How about you? Where do you work?
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| Re: a comment on Flowers by Dovina |
8-Feb-07/9:31 AM |
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Cool philosophy. I'll remember that. I'll be happy when those bucks flow in. Apart from that, we're only gearing up to open. So as of now, it's mainly recruiting time.
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| Re: a comment on Flowers by Dovina |
8-Feb-07/9:22 AM |
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Haven't worked for eight years, but have now taken over a supermarket. Ain't I adventurous?
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| Re: a comment on Flowers by Dovina |
8-Feb-07/9:12 AM |
Have been fine. But very busy. Have a new job.
How about you?
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| Re: a comment on Flowers by Dovina |
8-Feb-07/9:02 AM |
Hi Al. Hi Ranger. Good to see you both around. It must be Poemranker's lucky day, but probably Dovina's , more like it.
:-)))))))))))))))
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| Re: Flowers by Dovina |
8-Feb-07/3:10 AM |
Am I the only one to understand what you mean with all these flowers... dried or ascii. I'm happy to see this post and it gives me a nostalgic feel although the flowers are yours. Too bad that the string of ascii characters didn't come an angel's way, at least not yet.
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| Re: Drowning by wilco |
8-Feb-07/2:59 AM |
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When do we get to hear this piece of yours. Would love to. I like the style in most of your lyrics.
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| Re: Fanatic by Dovina |
11-Jan-07/9:26 PM |
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Very well put. An idea well conveyed.
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| Re: Self Portrait by Dovina |
7-Dec-06/5:49 AM |
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| Re: Sonnet 5 (The Second Deluge) by Schlinkey |
3-Dec-06/2:08 AM |
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I admire anyone who can write a beautiful sonnet, for this is something I have not achieved yet. You have done a swell job at it and hence I choose not to be too critical about its contents.
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| Re: And She Came Back by Enkidu |
3-Dec-06/2:03 AM |
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Hmmm.. I think this could be shortened to contain less detail and more impact.
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| Re: Instruction by Dovina |
3-Dec-06/1:48 AM |
I kinda wonder how you come up with the contents you write. Pretty good , I must say.
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| Re: Bitter by Ranger |
3-Dec-06/1:45 AM |
Ranger... this is just too good. I read it a couple of times..but never got down to commenting. Sorry for the delay. Keep writing. You do a very good job at it.
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| Re: a comment on She dreams by amanda_dcosta |
25-Nov-06/10:28 PM |
D, Ranger.. thanks. This is awesome. Must be really good since you both gave me a nine. :-)))))))))))
I am however making changes to the line that reads "of oaks and pine and firs growing tall" (3rd verse, 3rd line), and changing it back to "as snow flakes fall upon her nose". Think that works best.
Thanks.
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| Re: To Love One Another by Sunshine Conkey |
24-Nov-06/8:37 AM |
First of all, I see that you mentioned its someone else's poem. So, am not sure if I should grade it.
Apart from that its a nice sentiment, very true, but with spelling errors.
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| Re: Fifteen by Dovina |
24-Nov-06/8:31 AM |
hmmm. not bad. I have never climbed a pomogranate tree although we have 'em here. But I can say its a very tasty fruit.
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| Re: Three Worlds by Dovina |
13-Nov-06/6:43 PM |
D... It's surprising how you rhyme your lines. It's so unusual of you.
Apart from that, its sad to see that PR is heart broken.
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| Re: a comment on Dovina & Co by amanda_dcosta |
9-Nov-06/7:05 PM |
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Go ahead SR, empty all that dirt from inside you. Hope you feel better after that.
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