poemranker ::20 most recent comments by amanda_dcosta (41-60) and replies

Comments byamanda_dcosta, 41–60 back, including replies. Only comments on poems

replying on Flowers by Dovina 8 Feb 2007, 10:08 AM
Hi D. What's all this with flower power? :-))
replying on Flowers by Dovina 8 Feb 2007, 10:01 AM
Ha ha ha... you def are one optimistic guy. :-))))
replying on Flowers by Dovina 8 Feb 2007, 9:47 AM
One of India's largest corporate concerns... Reliance Ltd. (Reliance Retail Ltd.) It's the company's new venture. How about you? Where do you work?
replying on Flowers by Dovina 8 Feb 2007, 9:31 AM
Cool philosophy. I'll remember that. I'll be happy when those bucks flow in. Apart from that, we're only gearing up to open. So as of now, it's mainly recruiting time.
replying on Flowers by Dovina 8 Feb 2007, 9:22 AM
Haven't worked for eight years, but have now taken over a supermarket. Ain't I adventurous?
replying on Flowers by Dovina 8 Feb 2007, 9:12 AM
Have been fine. But very busy. Have a new job.
How about you?
replying on Flowers by Dovina 8 Feb 2007, 9:02 AM
Hi Al. Hi Ranger. Good to see you both around. It must be Poemranker's lucky day, but probably Dovina's , more like it.
:-)))))))))))))))
on Flowers by Dovina 8 Feb 2007, 3:10 AM
Am I the only one to understand what you mean with all these flowers... dried or ascii. I'm happy to see this post and it gives me a nostalgic feel although the flowers are yours. Too bad that the string of ascii characters didn't come an angel's way, at least not yet.
on Drowning by wilco 8 Feb 2007, 2:59 AM
When do we get to hear this piece of yours. Would love to. I like the style in most of your lyrics.
on Fanatic by Dovina 11 Jan 2007, 9:26 PM
Very well put. An idea well conveyed.
on Self Portrait by Dovina 7 Dec 2006, 5:49 AM
Beautiful insight.
on Sonnet 5 (The Second Deluge) by Schlinkey 3 Dec 2006, 2:08 AM
I admire anyone who can write a beautiful sonnet, for this is something I have not achieved yet. You have done a swell job at it and hence I choose not to be too critical about its contents.
on And She Came Back by Enkidu 3 Dec 2006, 2:03 AM
Hmmm.. I think this could be shortened to contain less detail and more impact.
on Instruction by Dovina 3 Dec 2006, 1:48 AM
I kinda wonder how you come up with the contents you write. Pretty good , I must say.
on Bitter by Ranger 3 Dec 2006, 1:45 AM
Ranger... this is just too good. I read it a couple of times..but never got down to commenting. Sorry for the delay. Keep writing. You do a very good job at it.
replying on She dreams by amanda_dcosta 25 Nov 2006, 10:28 PM
D, Ranger.. thanks. This is awesome. Must be really good since you both gave me a nine. :-)))))))))))

I am however making changes to the line that reads "of oaks and pine and firs growing tall" (3rd verse, 3rd line), and changing it back to "as snow flakes fall upon her nose". Think that works best.

Thanks.
on To Love One Another by Sunshine Conkey 24 Nov 2006, 8:37 AM
First of all, I see that you mentioned its someone else's poem. So, am not sure if I should grade it.

Apart from that its a nice sentiment, very true, but with spelling errors.
on Fifteen by Dovina 24 Nov 2006, 8:31 AM
hmmm. not bad. I have never climbed a pomogranate tree although we have 'em here. But I can say its a very tasty fruit.
on Three Worlds by Dovina 13 Nov 2006, 6:43 PM
D... It's surprising how you rhyme your lines. It's so unusual of you.

Apart from that, its sad to see that PR is heart broken.
replying on Dovina & Co by amanda_dcosta 9 Nov 2006, 7:05 PM
Go ahead SR, empty all that dirt from inside you. Hope you feel better after that.