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To Love One Another (Free verse) by Sunshine Conkey
To love one another, is to become one
You start and finish what one has begun;
You perspire tears and choke on sweat
You can't afford to get stuck in the net;
Of things to come that still seem the same
And to each of us, the other is to blame;
To listen to our thoughts, to read the need
Learning that days to come aren't just a deed;
Do onto others, as they do onto you
Isn't just a commandment thrown onto you;
It's the simple way any love should know
It's what we need to help us grow;
We should stop rebelling if things aren't going our way,
And stop controlling each and every day;
If we work together to make things right
Maybe we can end these rediculous fights;
They were right to say the best things in life are free,
And that is the love, between you and me...
**actually written by a friend~Michael**
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Posted: November 20, 2006 9:58 AM PST; Last modified: November 20, 2006 9:58 AM PST
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Apart from that its a nice sentiment, very true, but with spelling errors.