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Whenever Forever Is (Free verse) by Enkidu
Champions of unemployment resting
On sidewalks and
Under city stars
Traffic light loiterers
A swan of little grace
Dodging the RTD as it approaches
Drinking in the sunlit reflections
Of an urban atmosphere
Half a billion artists making
Far too many memories
And far too many mistakes and enemies
Rationing glory like gasoline
Snakes recede like shadows
Donning peafowl feathers
Smoking life out of harmony
Balanced on their poison coils
Celebrated morning at once unveils
A martyr pondering coffee grind
Shaming his inevitable fate to
Witness the casual undoings of hereafter
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Arithmetic Mean: 5.3333335
Weighted score: 5.0397344
Overall Rank: 7164
Posted: July 27, 2004 11:11 AM PDT; Last modified: January 15, 2006 5:35 PM PST
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