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Free verse № 111802

catastrophe

Member since 2003 · Posted 7 Sep 2004 · 0 comments

rusty palate muttering gutteral phrases wailing against a rail of despair tangled in the vines of modern times i arose to the din of combat raising her head to get closer to god without realizing that the reverse of this non-palindrome is true she stumbled to regain her former self limply bestowing friendly fire composure lost somewhere between breaths which accelerate rapidly to the pangs of a frightened drummer it must be your first war and though you've been lacerated from the inside by metaphorical shrapnel i witness the screams you utter frantically now lacking the ability to save you from the onslaught

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