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Fifteen (Free verse) by Dovina
A recent downy mustache
pushes forth upon his lip.
A creep of jungle
espaliers down his thigh,
as wet-soil scent
wafts musty from his covesâ
my changing playmate
in the pomegranate tree.
Something moves beneath me
in the limb on which we sit
late of afternoon
of later summer.
Red pomegranate berries
change to purple juice,
and distant mountain folds
to wine-stained glow.
It swings me limb to limb,
throws my feet on rocky ground.
I run as from an earthquake,
afraid of what Iâll lose.
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Posted: November 19, 2006 1:59 PM PST; Last modified: November 19, 2006 1:59 PM PST
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something about the distant mountain folds- makes no sense to me. I'm assuming the pomegranate berries are your period/ovulation.
Why do you run and what exactly are you running from might flesh (no pun intended) this out .
the distant mountain (changes) canyOns. put down the gin and juice.