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Fifteen (Free verse) by Dovina

A recent downy mustache pushes forth upon his lip. A creep of jungle espaliers down his thigh, as wet-soil scent wafts musty from his coves— my changing playmate in the pomegranate tree. Something moves beneath me in the limb on which we sit late of afternoon of later summer. Red pomegranate berries change to purple juice, and distant mountain folds to wine-stained glow. It swings me limb to limb, throws my feet on rocky ground. I run as from an earthquake, afraid of what I’ll lose.

Dovina 20-Nov-06/4:55 PM
Maybe you have never sat on the limb of a pomegranate tree, picking the big red fruit, stripping away the skin and the inner membranes that separate ranks of berries. They are very good when the juice squirts into you mouth as you chew them, spitting seeds onto the ground. They might be good with gin, I don't know.




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