Re: Thought by Quarton |
3-Mar-07/4:17 AM |
This is fantastic!! a little hard to read...more flow and its a go for me... :) Bethy
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Re: A Single Strand of Golden Yellow by Aetius |
3-Mar-07/4:13 AM |
I love this kind of "other verse" I write alot of it...I will post my sweater poem soon as well...it was written many moons ago...:) Bethy
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Re: The Laws of Life by lrustagi |
3-Mar-07/4:06 AM |
very good, I like this form of language...It appeals to one of my other lives...:) :) Bethy
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Re: The Beginning by jessicazee |
3-Mar-07/3:52 AM |
I don't know why but I get it...I've been wearing a single shoe for 7 years...lol :) Bethy
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Re: Quantum Reality by Quarton |
3-Mar-07/3:44 AM |
I read this twice...pause...three times...dito on science and speculation(Dovina)...second last para is my fav part...:) Bethy
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Re: In the assessment of zero by Prince of Void |
3-Mar-07/3:36 AM |
Sir, your poem in comments is better...however the one posted is good too...I thought of war and dying...helplessness and pain...sad thoughts but that is what popped into my mind... :) Bethy
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Re: Taste of Ash (A long project barely beginning) by sliver |
3-Mar-07/3:28 AM |
Is this about life...longevity...spontanious combustion...without an inner fire, one could fizzel out...??? This is what I got from your lyrics...am I anywhere close? I'll vote later... :) Bethy
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Re: The Ballad of Andy Thomas (A True Story) by Rakesh Rajani |
12-Feb-07/9:58 AM |
A true story? WOW! I think we all have gone to school with an "Andy" Sad but a good poem/story.
:) Bethy
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Re: a days journey by donmiguel1960 |
12-Feb-07/6:58 AM |
I love the word "befuddled" its how I wake up some days...usually when I can't find clean socks, or my agenda...either or...it is a real feeling... Bethy:)
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Re: Ode to a Pimple-Lyric Spawned by Phalkon's Greasy Face. by SupremeDreamer |
12-Feb-07/6:53 AM |
My vote...I wish to be very very dead; I love this...simple serious... Bethy :)
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Re: Captured by Dovina |
12-Feb-07/6:46 AM |
Short of sounding like a Coke or Pepsi add, There's Nothing Like The Real Thing Baby! lol,
Good Good Good !!! Bethy:)
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Re: Celui by half.italian |
12-Feb-07/6:39 AM |
sexy...good memory... :) Bethy
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Re: a comment on Tea,One Night Stands and Smores by Bethy |
5-Feb-07/10:12 AM |
Thank you Ranger...how sweet of you...have a nice day :) Bethy
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Re: Flowers by Dovina |
5-Feb-07/7:17 AM |
Hello my friend...once again a great entry...its time for me to throw out all my dried flowers from my dates of days gone by...lol :) Bethy
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Re: Brinkmanshit by Stephen Robins |
11-Jan-07/7:43 PM |
LMAO....you get a "10" from my mom...and one from me too... :) Bethy
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Re: a comment on Let Me Entertain You by Bethy |
7-Jan-07/12:44 PM |
Thank you Stephen...its a true little poem...lol :) Bethy
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Re: An Ode To My Dead Husband Bert by Edna Sweetlove |
29-Aug-06/1:02 PM |
Should I laugh? :) good poem, Bethy
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Re: Ending Well by Dovina |
29-Aug-06/12:43 PM |
Hi Dovina, your poems have always been some of my favs...Bethy :)
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Re: Quatrain by ALChemy |
29-Aug-06/12:39 PM |
This is gooood Al, yeah it's me Bethy...:)
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Re: a comment on My Dad's Armchair. by Bethy |
15-Feb-06/4:21 PM |
Hi Al good to see you too, Happy Valentines to you my friend :) :) Bethy
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