on Thought by Quarton
3 Mar 2007, 4:17 AM
This is fantastic!! a little hard to read...more flow and its a go for me... :) Bethy
on A Single Strand of Golden Yellow by Aetius
3 Mar 2007, 4:13 AM
I love this kind of "other verse" I write alot of it...I will post my sweater poem soon as well...it was written many moons ago...:) Bethy
on The Laws of Life by lrustagi
3 Mar 2007, 4:06 AM
very good, I like this form of language...It appeals to one of my other lives...:) :) Bethy
on The Beginning by jessicazee
3 Mar 2007, 3:52 AM
I don't know why but I get it...I've been wearing a single shoe for 7 years...lol :) Bethy
on Quantum Reality by Quarton
3 Mar 2007, 3:44 AM
I read this twice...pause...three times...dito on science and speculation(Dovina)...second last para is my fav part...:) Bethy
on In the assessment of zero by Prince of Void
3 Mar 2007, 3:36 AM
Sir, your poem in comments is better...however the one posted is good too...I thought of war and dying...helplessness and pain...sad thoughts but that is what popped into my mind... :) Bethy
on Taste of Ash (A long project barely beginning) by sliver
3 Mar 2007, 3:28 AM
Is this about life...longevity...spontanious combustion...without an inner fire, one could fizzel out...??? This is what I got from your lyrics...am I anywhere close? I'll vote later... :) Bethy
on The Ballad of Andy Thomas (A True Story) by Rakesh Rajani
12 Feb 2007, 9:58 AM
A true story? WOW! I think we all have gone to school with an "Andy" Sad but a good poem/story.
:) Bethy
:) Bethy
on a days journey by donmiguel1960
12 Feb 2007, 6:58 AM
I love the word "befuddled" its how I wake up some days...usually when I can't find clean socks, or my agenda...either or...it is a real feeling... Bethy:)
on Ode to a Pimple-Lyric Spawned by Phalkon's Greasy Face. by SupremeDreamer
12 Feb 2007, 6:53 AM
My vote...I wish to be very very dead; I love this...simple serious... Bethy :)
on Celui by half.italian
12 Feb 2007, 6:39 AM
sexy...good memory... :) Bethy
replying on Tea,One Night Stands and Smores by Bethy
5 Feb 2007, 10:12 AM
Thank you Ranger...how sweet of you...have a nice day :) Bethy
on Brinkmanshit by Stephen Robins
11 Jan 2007, 7:43 PM
LMAO....you get a "10" from my mom...and one from me too... :) Bethy
replying on Let Me Entertain You by Bethy
7 Jan 2007, 12:44 PM
Thank you Stephen...its a true little poem...lol :) Bethy
on An Ode To My Dead Husband Bert by Edna Sweetlove
29 Aug 2006, 1:02 PM
Should I laugh? :) good poem, Bethy
on Ending Well by Dovina
29 Aug 2006, 12:43 PM
Hi Dovina, your poems have always been some of my favs...Bethy :)
replying on My Dad's Armchair. by Bethy
15 Feb 2006, 4:21 PM
Hi Al good to see you too, Happy Valentines to you my friend :) :) Bethy