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Captured (Free verse) by Dovina
Thick fingers grasp a shovel,
clutch a swinging pick,
heft a rock-filled wheelbarrowâ
hands so big, when one is
cupped upon my nose,
thumb and pinkie
touch each earâ
on its backside, coarse dark hairs,
roughened hide withinâ
antithesis of mine.
Within a softer crevice
behind a gnarly knuckle,
calloused hills on either side
fold around a tender fingerâ
a little fear, a little power,
as the lion gently smiles.
Other fingers join to hold
a long and polished nail,
a tiny member, trapped as prey,
held huskily in fluted flesh,
squeezed in muscular quiver,
to comfort, crush, caress,
according to his wish.
My finger-weapon
like a trainerâs chair,
but better to enticeâ
a large and sturdy paw,
protects a weaker vessel,
can handle softer life.
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Arithmetic Mean: 6.5
Weighted score: 5.4034123
Overall Rank: 3135
Posted: February 9, 2007 1:46 PM PST; Last modified: February 12, 2007 7:33 PM PST
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