| Re: :: wandering by elementalidad |
12-Sep-08/9:31 AM |
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this is good but I like snowsounds better
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| Re: Babe TRUTH by T. Jonathron Remp |
26-Sep-08/5:02 PM |
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Rich with wisdom indeed! Nature only wants you to replenish its wonders. Too bad everyone doesn't see it this way. One of my favs for sure!
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| Re: .: night owl (2) by elementalidad |
26-Sep-08/5:15 PM |
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| Re: night owl (3) by elementalidad |
26-Sep-08/5:17 PM |
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get busy then...can't wait to see more
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| Re: freedom for all by ThePariahDog |
26-Sep-08/5:18 PM |
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emotional, awakening, real
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| Re: The state of things... by hobojo |
26-Sep-08/5:20 PM |
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Most are not willing...reality in words...wonderful
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| Re: Pause by Nepanthe |
26-Sep-08/5:27 PM |
This is interesting...I just wrote a poem about a message in a bottle. This is the first I viewed your poem.
Have you ever looked in the eyes of our elderly? It is amazing what you can see. Perhaps we all should pause...and say "Hello in there" (a quote from John Prine's song called, "Hello in There")
Great poem... :) Bethy
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| Re: night owl (4) by elementalidad |
26-Sep-08/5:33 PM |
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very good...I have never really been a big fan of Senryu, however, you make it easy to like.
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| Re: night owl (5) by elementalidad |
29-Sep-08/10:14 AM |
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oh the sweet sound of peace... :)
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| Re: Rails to Trails by Dovina |
29-Sep-08/10:20 AM |
Oh what now does our future hold? When we look into the eyes of the old, our parents knew and now us, not then...will we find out...who, what and when? (something from an old poem I wrote)
This is perfectly wonderful Dovina.
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| Re: Anger by Celticai |
29-Sep-08/10:24 AM |
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I'd say destructive...if letting the force free...
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| Re: Mountain Fever by Celticai |
29-Sep-08/10:27 AM |
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perfect! I don't know what to say...I feel like I am sitting on a mountain in Peru. Thank you
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| Re: Beauty? by Celticai |
2-Oct-08/4:44 AM |
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The truth about life in the (game)name of beauty. Beauty in is the garden surrounded by potatoes, string beans, corn and flowers. Beauty is deeper than the ground in earth on your skin when you grow things to feed your children. Beauty is inspiring, living in the moment, playing in the leaves, and having chicken nuggets and kraft dinner by candle light with your son and daughter. Beauty is when you read a poem and know that there is hope, happiness, sadness, reality and you feel what the author has written. So, you hold on to that and know there is beauty in their soul. You are an amazing writer. You inspire me. Bethy :)
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| Re: unheeded by Skamper |
2-Oct-08/5:02 AM |
My father threw a glass of water at me threw my bedroom window while I was enjoying a smoke with my dearest friend. He was a fireman at one time in his life. So, at the supper table that night, my mom got home from work, ask my father how his day was, and his reply is as follows, "I put a fire out in Bethy's bedroom today. I think she and Edna will be fine, I think they were scared though, thank god I was home at the time." lol
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| Re: Words by Celticai |
14-Oct-08/8:15 AM |
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get out of my head...lol...very good
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| Re: Him, again and again... by hobojo |
14-Oct-08/8:18 AM |
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hmmmmm lost for words at this moment...love this
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| Re: Spanish Patio at Old Mission Inn by Dovina |
14-Oct-08/8:24 AM |
your toooooo good for this site...:) but don't leave...I love reading what you write Dovina.
I love the second last verse...(Then as if selected)
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| Re: Amazing Grace ~ for all bass drummers ;) by Celticai |
14-Oct-08/8:26 AM |
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| Re: Sleeping Beauty by celticskatermatt1 |
15-Oct-08/2:20 PM |
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There is truly a poem here worth reading, however I do agree with Dovina on editing...it has lovely overtones which makes me want to give you an 8 for you beauitful thoughts...
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| Re: definitely/maybe/mobius by malpaso |
15-Oct-08/2:29 PM |
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say you disagree...perhaps?
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