on Amazing Grace ~ for all bass drummers ;) by Celticai
14 Oct 2008, 8:26 AM
totally fun Drummah !!!
on Him, again and again... by hobojo
14 Oct 2008, 8:18 AM
hmmmmm lost for words at this moment...love this
on Spanish Patio at Old Mission Inn by Dovina
14 Oct 2008, 8:24 AM
your toooooo good for this site...:) but don't leave...I love reading what you write Dovina.
I love the second last verse...(Then as if selected)
I love the second last verse...(Then as if selected)
on Sleeping Beauty by celticskatermatt1
15 Oct 2008, 2:20 PM
There is truly a poem here worth reading, however I do agree with Dovina on editing...it has lovely overtones which makes me want to give you an 8 for you beauitful thoughts...
on definitely/maybe/mobius by malpaso
15 Oct 2008, 2:29 PM
say you disagree...perhaps?
on Rails to Trails by Dovina
29 Sep 2008, 10:20 AM
Oh what now does our future hold? When we look into the eyes of the old, our parents knew and now us, not then...will we find out...who, what and when? (something from an old poem I wrote)
This is perfectly wonderful Dovina.
This is perfectly wonderful Dovina.
My father threw a glass of water at me threw my bedroom window while I was enjoying a smoke with my dearest friend. He was a fireman at one time in his life. So, at the supper table that night, my mom got home from work, ask my father how his day was, and his reply is as follows, "I put a fire out in Bethy's bedroom today. I think she and Edna will be fine, I think they were scared though, thank god I was home at the time." lol
on The state of things... by hobojo
26 Sep 2008, 5:20 PM
Most are not willing...reality in words...wonderful
on Mountain Fever by Celticai
29 Sep 2008, 10:27 AM
perfect! I don't know what to say...I feel like I am sitting on a mountain in Peru. Thank you
on :: wandering by elementalidad
12 Sep 2008, 9:31 AM
this is good but I like snowsounds better
The truth about life in the (game)name of beauty. Beauty in is the garden surrounded by potatoes, string beans, corn and flowers. Beauty is deeper than the ground in earth on your skin when you grow things to feed your children. Beauty is inspiring, living in the moment, playing in the leaves, and having chicken nuggets and kraft dinner by candle light with your son and daughter. Beauty is when you read a poem and know that there is hope, happiness, sadness, reality and you feel what the author has written. So, you hold on to that and know there is beauty in their soul. You are an amazing writer. You inspire me. Bethy :)
This is interesting...I just wrote a poem about a message in a bottle. This is the first I viewed your poem.
Have you ever looked in the eyes of our elderly? It is amazing what you can see. Perhaps we all should pause...and say "Hello in there" (a quote from John Prine's song called, "Hello in There")
Great poem... :) Bethy
Have you ever looked in the eyes of our elderly? It is amazing what you can see. Perhaps we all should pause...and say "Hello in there" (a quote from John Prine's song called, "Hello in There")
Great poem... :) Bethy
on night owl (4) by elementalidad
26 Sep 2008, 5:33 PM
very good...I have never really been a big fan of Senryu, however, you make it easy to like.
on .: night owl (2) by elementalidad
26 Sep 2008, 5:15 PM
panic! well done
on night owl (3) by elementalidad
26 Sep 2008, 5:17 PM
get busy then...can't wait to see more
on freedom for all by ThePariahDog
26 Sep 2008, 5:18 PM
emotional, awakening, real
on night owl (5) by elementalidad
29 Sep 2008, 10:14 AM
oh the sweet sound of peace... :)
on Babe TRUTH by T. Jonathron Remp
26 Sep 2008, 5:02 PM
Rich with wisdom indeed! Nature only wants you to replenish its wonders. Too bad everyone doesn't see it this way. One of my favs for sure!