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Amazing Grace ~ for all bass drummers ;) (Free verse) by Celticai âYes, itâs better thanâ¦.
Yes, itâs better thanâ¦.
Yes, itâs better thanâ¦.â
Feel the beat and the heat
The thrum of the drum
It resonates, permeates, exonerates
My soul.
Urging, surging, purging
My mind.
Overlaid with the haunting tones of the pipes
Returning to my Celtic roots of the Rowan Tree
Hitting, beating, brushing, caressing
The goatskin head
Hips sway, a distant place
Hands play, soulâs grace
âYes, itâs better thanâ¦.
Yes, itâs better thanâ¦.
Yes, itâs better thanâ¦.
SEX!â
Up the ladder:
Withering Rose
Down the ladder:
Let God Unwrite Itself
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Posted: October 6, 2008 2:00 PM PDT; Last modified: October 6, 2008 2:00 PM PDTWeighted score: 5.1490035 Overall Rank: 5338 Comments:
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Dovina @ 75.82.253.189
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6-Oct-08/4:56 PM
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I'd leave out the yes's only because it sounds more like a drum without them. Most of the lines have a drum beat, but a few don't, like "Overlaid with the haunting tones of the pipes" Not that they all have to, but it would be nice.
Thanks.. Although the "Yes, it's better than..." are actually a rhythm that I use to play a calypso beat to Amazing Grace.
totally fun Drummah !!!
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