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Amazing Grace ~ for all bass drummers ;) (Free verse) by Celticai

“Yes, it’s better than…. Yes, it’s better than…. Yes, it’s better than….” Feel the beat and the heat The thrum of the drum It resonates, permeates, exonerates My soul. Urging, surging, purging My mind. Overlaid with the haunting tones of the pipes Returning to my Celtic roots of the Rowan Tree Hitting, beating, brushing, caressing The goatskin head Hips sway, a distant place Hands play, soul’s grace “Yes, it’s better than…. Yes, it’s better than…. Yes, it’s better than…. SEX!”

Celticai 6-Oct-08/4:58 PM
Thanks.. Although the "Yes, it's better than..." are actually a rhythm that I use to play a calypso beat to Amazing Grace.




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