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Spare Change (Sonnet) by andrewjthomas
A quarter, dime, and nickel all inside
my pocket jeans. She asked for change, to flip
a coin. (The normal wear and tear contrived
by caustic sarcasm can cause scales to tip.)
I reached for metal, came up empty air,
a stupid thumb-extended pantomime.
So call it.
Heads or tails,
I landed there
unmoving,
lost,
without her hand in mine.
With penny jars and piggy banks, I saved
the money meant for rainy days and slot
machines. A fool and money part, they say...
I think I'd rather live this lot than not.
Unlike the former miser, sparing grace,
accosted now, I give at valued face.
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Arithmetic Mean: 6.25
Weighted score: 5.1490035
Overall Rank: 5304
Posted: January 29, 2004 2:13 PM PST; Last modified: January 31, 2004 2:03 PM PST
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but you're right, 'moron' definitely throws off the meter
so, based on your comment, are you in the south?