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Anger (Free verse) by Celticai Swirling, seething, simmering
Molten lava just beneath the surface
Of an uncertain crust
âYou need to let that anger out!â
How???
The primeval forces will destroy
Destruct
Detonate
All that I am and could be.
Is it more productive to let this facile façade free?
Up the ladder:
On Any Given Day...
Down the ladder:
Little Talons
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Posted: September 28, 2008 4:43 PM PDT; Last modified: September 28, 2008 4:43 PM PDTWeighted score: 5.2384057 Overall Rank: 4144 Comments:
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Bethy @ 165.154.46.224
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29-Sep-08/10:24 AM
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I'd say destructive...if letting the force free...
Thanks Bethy... this is just one of those poems that gave me an opportunity to express how I was feeling at the time! :)
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