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Anger (Free verse) by Celticai
Swirling, seething, simmering Molten lava just beneath the surface Of an uncertain crust “You need to let that anger out!” How??? The primeval forces will destroy Destruct Detonate All that I am and could be. Is it more productive to let this facile façade free?

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Arithmetic Mean: 7.0
Weighted score: 5.2384057
Overall Rank: 4142
Posted: September 28, 2008 4:43 PM PDT; Last modified: September 28, 2008 4:43 PM PDT
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[9] Bethy @ 165.154.46.224 | 29-Sep-08/10:24 AM | Reply
I'd say destructive...if letting the force free...
[n/a] Celticai @ 121.222.109.48 | 29-Sep-08/1:15 PM | Reply
Thanks Bethy... this is just one of those poems that gave me an opportunity to express how I was feeling at the time! :)
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