Sleeping Beauty

Member since 2004 · Posted 14 Oct 2008 · 3 comments

Lying in your bed, let your eyes rest as you lay your head. Drifting thoughts lead to pleasant memories and you smiles begin to sail away on the ship of wandering slumber. Dream on, Dream on, you're the stars sleeping beauty.

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[4] Dovina 15-Oct-08/11:19 AM Reply

Clearly you love her, but clearly too cliched and unedited for posting. Cheers

[8] Bethy 15-Oct-08/2:20 PM Reply

There is truly a poem here worth reading, however I do agree with Dovina on editing...it has lovely overtones which makes me want to give you an 8 for you beauitful thoughts...

[8] Bethy › Bethy 15-Oct-08/2:22 PM Reply

*you edit your