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Sleeping Beauty (Free verse) by celticskatermatt1 Lying in your bed, let your eyes rest as you lay your head. Drifting
thoughts lead to pleasant memories and you smiles begin to sail away on
the ship of wandering slumber. Dream on, Dream on, you're the stars
sleeping beauty.
Up the ladder:
Mother Mayday is Here to Stay (Stay Away!)
Down the ladder:
will not heal
Votes: (green: user, blue: anonymous)
Arithmetic Mean: 6.0
Posted: October 14, 2008 11:25 PM PDT; Last modified: October 14, 2008 11:25 PM PDTWeighted score: 5.0474257 Overall Rank: 6922 Comments:
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Dovina @ 208.127.228.168
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15-Oct-08/11:19 AM
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Clearly you love her, but clearly too cliched and unedited for posting. Cheers
There is truly a poem here worth reading, however I do agree with Dovina on editing...it has lovely overtones which makes me want to give you an 8 for you beauitful thoughts...
*you edit your
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