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Sleeping Beauty (Free verse) by celticskatermatt1

Lying in your bed, let your eyes rest as you lay your head. Drifting thoughts lead to pleasant memories and you smiles begin to sail away on the ship of wandering slumber. Dream on, Dream on, you're the stars sleeping beauty.

Bethy 15-Oct-08/2:20 PM
There is truly a poem here worth reading, however I do agree with Dovina on editing...it has lovely overtones which makes me want to give you an 8 for you beauitful thoughts...




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