| Re: definitely/maybe/mobius by malpaso |
15-Oct-08/2:29 PM |
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say you disagree...perhaps?
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| Re: a comment on Sleeping Beauty by celticskatermatt1 |
15-Oct-08/2:22 PM |
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| Re: Sleeping Beauty by celticskatermatt1 |
15-Oct-08/2:20 PM |
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There is truly a poem here worth reading, however I do agree with Dovina on editing...it has lovely overtones which makes me want to give you an 8 for you beauitful thoughts...
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| Re: a comment on The Story of Wallace, Janey and Norman by Bethy |
14-Oct-08/8:31 AM |
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its not true...and 'threw' is a typo...blah...wasn't paying attention...I shortened this by 7 pages...good thing I didn't post it alll hahaha thanks my friend
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| Re: Amazing Grace ~ for all bass drummers ;) by Celticai |
14-Oct-08/8:26 AM |
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| Re: Spanish Patio at Old Mission Inn by Dovina |
14-Oct-08/8:24 AM |
your toooooo good for this site...:) but don't leave...I love reading what you write Dovina.
I love the second last verse...(Then as if selected)
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| Re: Him, again and again... by hobojo |
14-Oct-08/8:18 AM |
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hmmmmm lost for words at this moment...love this
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| Re: Words by Celticai |
14-Oct-08/8:15 AM |
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get out of my head...lol...very good
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| Re: unheeded by Skamper |
2-Oct-08/5:02 AM |
My father threw a glass of water at me threw my bedroom window while I was enjoying a smoke with my dearest friend. He was a fireman at one time in his life. So, at the supper table that night, my mom got home from work, ask my father how his day was, and his reply is as follows, "I put a fire out in Bethy's bedroom today. I think she and Edna will be fine, I think they were scared though, thank god I was home at the time." lol
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| Re: Beauty? by Celticai |
2-Oct-08/4:44 AM |
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The truth about life in the (game)name of beauty. Beauty in is the garden surrounded by potatoes, string beans, corn and flowers. Beauty is deeper than the ground in earth on your skin when you grow things to feed your children. Beauty is inspiring, living in the moment, playing in the leaves, and having chicken nuggets and kraft dinner by candle light with your son and daughter. Beauty is when you read a poem and know that there is hope, happiness, sadness, reality and you feel what the author has written. So, you hold on to that and know there is beauty in their soul. You are an amazing writer. You inspire me. Bethy :)
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| Re: a comment on Lover by Bethy |
2-Oct-08/3:36 AM |
"wisped" and past tense :) spelling error, eekkk
I was hoping someone would see that this was a poem about puberty. I wrote this 29 yrs ago, at age 14...I had a lot of freaky dreams and this was one. Thought I'd submit it and see what would happen. After reading it, I now see that perhaps people would think it to be about a vampire :).Hmmm maybe it was a vampire, heheh. Innocently assuming, none the less...maybe a different title? more info? Of course that would be a lot of changes for an old poem.
Thank you Drummah. Its nice to see new work here on poemranker.
You truly have class and style. :) Bethy
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| Re: a comment on My Dad's Armchair. by Bethy |
30-Sep-08/10:13 AM |
Thank you hobojo. I now own my Dads chair and I am sitting in it now. It is my own personal way of staying close to him and all that he has done and given me in life. I have gotten hugs, scoldings,prayers and spankings all from that chair. It is a huge part of my history, and a bigger part of who I am today.
Hugs :) Bethy
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| Re: a comment on Bottled Wisdom by Bethy |
29-Sep-08/10:35 AM |
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Thank you for your kind words Drummah.
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| Re: Mountain Fever by Celticai |
29-Sep-08/10:27 AM |
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perfect! I don't know what to say...I feel like I am sitting on a mountain in Peru. Thank you
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| Re: Anger by Celticai |
29-Sep-08/10:24 AM |
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I'd say destructive...if letting the force free...
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| Re: Rails to Trails by Dovina |
29-Sep-08/10:20 AM |
Oh what now does our future hold? When we look into the eyes of the old, our parents knew and now us, not then...will we find out...who, what and when? (something from an old poem I wrote)
This is perfectly wonderful Dovina.
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| Re: night owl (5) by elementalidad |
29-Sep-08/10:14 AM |
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oh the sweet sound of peace... :)
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| Re: a comment on Social Studies is for MORANS!! by T. Jonathron Remp |
27-Sep-08/9:29 AM |
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yep...I work in a daycare/and teach adult education, quite a combination huh? none the less, your work is as important as any others...keep making your statements...there are people out here in the barrens of society that understand...
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| Re: night owl (4) by elementalidad |
26-Sep-08/5:33 PM |
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very good...I have never really been a big fan of Senryu, however, you make it easy to like.
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| Re: Pause by Nepanthe |
26-Sep-08/5:27 PM |
This is interesting...I just wrote a poem about a message in a bottle. This is the first I viewed your poem.
Have you ever looked in the eyes of our elderly? It is amazing what you can see. Perhaps we all should pause...and say "Hello in there" (a quote from John Prine's song called, "Hello in There")
Great poem... :) Bethy
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