on under the weather by 7!3
4 Sep 2008, 9:11 AM
we wear the same shoes sometimes :)
on Billy Collins by INTRANSIT
2 Sep 2008, 10:02 AM
:)
on Suicide Note(Broken Down) by alvinb
2 Sep 2008, 9:51 AM
Life is beautiful, this life is sad. A hug for the writer of the note. :)
on Are your eyes by hobojo
2 Sep 2008, 9:47 AM
I can hear what you have written, may I ask is this a slow song or fast? I feel that it is kind of a hard rock ballad, am I close?
on 5 minute poem: section by Bill Z Bub
2 Sep 2008, 9:16 AM
very good
on Smelly Scum Child. by Y2kSlamPoet
2 Sep 2008, 9:12 AM
Crazy as it may seem, there is actually a story in this horrid evening of a "high" I prefer the natural high, (air) but to each his own.
on Social Studies is for MORANS!! by T. Jonathron Remp
2 Sep 2008, 9:05 AM
Ha Ha good fun!! Did I mention I teach...
on Gadgets and Poems by Dovina
2 Sep 2008, 9:00 AM
I have wonderful memories like these as well.
on A Question by poetry_rancour
13 Mar 2007, 10:05 AM
hehehe lol...and it should be...:) Bethy
on STAN by poetry_rancour
13 Mar 2007, 10:04 AM
talent...fun to read...:) Bethy
on Just today by MacFrantic
13 Mar 2007, 9:56 AM
I like this...judgement comes to those who know how the story ends...:) Bethy
on Pedaling West by Dovina
13 Mar 2007, 9:50 AM
May God grant you with "Buns of Steel" my dear friend...good poem :) Bethy
Truly, I have to agree with you Drnick...to my surprise... I had been away for a bit...life stuff... and when I came back to PR, I was shocked to see how this site was being ran...its good to see folks like Dovina, yourself, and a few others trying to hang on to the respect of fellow writers...then only to find we were being slammed for our efforts...this site is for people to post and recieve honest critiques...somehow I believe it has changed into a show of "Who can rank Who" the lowest...I respect Dovina and others and their help and suggestions...shouldn't this be the way we run this site...to help and encourage , not slam and insult those who want a space to seek advice and honesty??? I love reading poetry etc. however...I find myself skipping authors...mainly because of the content, and because I am baffled as to what I should rank their entry...I appreciate the various styles and topics...and rank accordingly...shouldn't we all? Keep doing what you do best...and perhaps the rest will come back...I miss Alchemy, shushin, ranger,wilco and many more... and their opinions...maybe they saw something we did not want to...this should be a forum for all poets and for those who just want to write...like me...I just want to write...and I know who honestly ranks the poem, not the person...a low rank or score is not going to stop me from writing, I have been writing for 30 plus years...the advice and grammar/punctuation/spelling, is what I seek help with...and to see if I did okay...Dovina has always been supportive and honest...she keeps me grounded...you should love her...lol
I think with all the talent you have that the above poem is great in a poetic point of view...but...we can't all like the topic...so I give you a 6 because you are a great poet :) Bethy
I think with all the talent you have that the above poem is great in a poetic point of view...but...we can't all like the topic...so I give you a 6 because you are a great poet :) Bethy
on A Rendezvous by lrustagi
9 Mar 2007, 1:18 PM
I like this !! Don't change a word... :) Bethy
on looking for by Phalkon
3 Mar 2007, 4:39 AM
Writers block, It's easier if you try to eat Cherrio's with a fork. :) Bethy
on Shoe Thief by Blue Magpie
3 Mar 2007, 4:28 AM
A poetic story of canine reality...fun to read, my son loved it! he gives you a 9 and I gave you a 7, so...we compromised with an 8 :) Bethy