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under the weather (Free verse) by 7!3
i'm sick of love and everyone around, dancing around like love is peace. i'm tried of waiting for no one to come, to turn up and say "you're just not the one". it doesn't make sense but i'm here anyway. i don't know if i care anymore, i don't know if i want you like before. just another day by myself to ponder, and when i go to sleep i just don't want to think about my future...

Up the ladder: American Semele (Edit)
Down the ladder: The Unsung Hero

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Arithmetic Mean: 6.3333335
Weighted score: 5.1589375
Overall Rank: 5140
Posted: June 6, 2006 7:52 PM PDT; Last modified: June 6, 2006 7:52 PM PDT
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[9] Bethy @ 165.154.46.18 | 4-Sep-08/9:11 AM | Reply
we wear the same shoes sometimes :)
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