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Suicide Note(Broken Down) (Free verse) by alvinb I made a red river with my knife...
A red river flowing at the middle of the night...
And tomorrow it''l be a big lake...
So it'll drown this world i can't take...
Up the ladder:
rear end of the storm
Down the ladder:
broodmood
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Posted: August 25, 2008 7:51 PM PDT; Last modified: August 28, 2008 1:42 AM PDTWeighted score: 5.0794687 Overall Rank: 6424 Comments:
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Bethy @ 165.154.46.180
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2-Sep-08/9:51 AM
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Life is beautiful, this life is sad. A hug for the writer of the note. :)
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alvinb @ 124.217.79.105
> Bethy
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8-Sep-08/1:04 AM
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tnx man,...
I have a better exit stategy.
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