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Suicide Note(Broken Down) (Free verse) by alvinb

I made a red river with my knife... A red river flowing at the middle of the night... And tomorrow it''l be a big lake... So it'll drown this world i can't take...

alvinb 8-Sep-08/1:04 AM
tnx man,...




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