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Are your eyes (Lyric) by hobojo
Eyes so beautiful No color can describe twinkles and glances from mysterious eyes Haunting leaves me wanting your beautiful eyes holding your gaze a soulful maze are your eyes And I look away I can not stare for you must know how I feel as I pull away from the power you hold in your gaze such a maze are your eyes I have no courage to change as I look at your reflection you control the music in my life you hold the power in your hands but its your eyes I can not understand as they capture my soul we both know if there is a soul you have touched mine with your eyes such beautiful eyes laughing, glancing, seductive eyes what power you hold over me with your eyes are your eyes can they see through me? I need to know for your eyes see all that I am such a maze I am lost in as I gaze

Up the ladder: for sharon
Down the ladder: Lost

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Arithmetic Mean: 6.0
Weighted score: 5.119203
Overall Rank: 5865
Posted: August 18, 2008 6:13 PM PDT; Last modified: August 18, 2008 10:27 PM PDT
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Comments:
[6] SupremeDreamer @ 99.170.144.252 | 21-Aug-08/9:10 PM | Reply
The symplistic rhyme is why I give a six rather than a seven.
[7] Bethy @ 165.154.46.180 | 2-Sep-08/9:47 AM | Reply
I can hear what you have written, may I ask is this a slow song or fast? I feel that it is kind of a hard rock ballad, am I close?
[5] half.italian @ 98.151.18.37 | 7-Sep-08/12:49 AM | Reply
As lyrics, 7. As stand-alone poem 5.
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