fleeting thoughts

Member since 2004 · Posted 26 Mar 2004 · Edited 26 May 2004 · 5 comments

a sunny day, a warm breeze the sun kissing my cheeks salty mist of the sea i taste that's how i miss you words would never be enough they never could encompass my feelings show my thoughts my joy at meeting you... that first... glance that first...smile the words exchanged i'll keep you in my heart forever never to be left never to shed a tear never to doubt and if doubt would come... assurance if tears would fall... i would wipe them when longing... i'll be there in sadness and joy ... forever will i be there...

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[10] -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. 26-Mar-04/1:04 PM Reply

An officer's dumpling pouch of ellipsis misuse.

[n/a] francis nor capule › -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. 26-Mar-04/1:06 PM Reply

i'm trying my best ;-) thanks ...

[8] Shuushin 26-Mar-04/3:07 PM Reply

yep. a "missing you" poem.

[10] caitydee › Shuushin 26-May-04/8:15 PM Reply

not necessarily bad because its a "missing you" poem, no?

[8] Shuushin › caitydee 27-May-04/6:45 AM Reply

no - not at all; we've all been there. Got a few on here meself.