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fleeting thoughts (Free verse) by francis nor capule a sunny day, a warm breeze
the sun kissing my cheeks
salty mist of the sea i taste
that's how i miss you
words would never be enough
they never could
encompass my feelings
show my thoughts
my joy at meeting you...
that first... glance
that first...smile
the words exchanged
i'll keep you in my heart forever
never to be left
never to shed a tear
never to doubt
and if doubt would come... assurance
if tears would fall... i would wipe them
when longing... i'll be there
in sadness and joy ... forever will i be there...
Up the ladder:
bleeding
Down the ladder:
Are your eyes
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Posted: March 26, 2004 9:33 AM PST; Last modified: May 26, 2004 10:02 AM PDTWeighted score: 5.119203 Overall Rank: 5919 Comments:
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-=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. @ 194.222.223.239
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26-Mar-04/1:04 PM
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An officer's dumpling pouch of ellipsis misuse.
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francis nor capule @ 210.23.227.51
> -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I.
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26-Mar-04/1:06 PM
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i'm trying my best ;-) thanks ...
yep. a "missing you" poem.
not necessarily bad because its a "missing you" poem, no?
no - not at all; we've all been there. Got a few on here meself.
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