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fleeting thoughts (Free verse) by francis nor capule

a sunny day, a warm breeze the sun kissing my cheeks salty mist of the sea i taste that's how i miss you words would never be enough they never could encompass my feelings show my thoughts my joy at meeting you... that first... glance that first...smile the words exchanged i'll keep you in my heart forever never to be left never to shed a tear never to doubt and if doubt would come... assurance if tears would fall... i would wipe them when longing... i'll be there in sadness and joy ... forever will i be there...

-=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. 26-Mar-04/1:04 PM
An officer's dumpling pouch of ellipsis misuse.




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