This should be termed either a "micro poem" or a "teaser poem". It seems as if you conjured up an awesome outline of a mighty centurions' head and never got around to giving him a body in which to conduct battle. I demand that this warrior be given flesh, blood, and a wicked keen blade!!
I want to say eight, or even nine at this point;- but since you left your behemoth wanting, I am forced to give this a five.
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It's good as some kind of saying or whatever. But a poem?? give me more and we'll talk.
I want to say eight, or even nine at this point;- but since you left your behemoth wanting, I am forced to give this a five.
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