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Hum (Free verse) by Nepanthe

Electric blue dragonfly on a live wire, vibrate in a dirge as a string on a lyre.

SupremeDreamer 5-Sep-08/7:10 PM
This should be termed either a "micro poem" or a "teaser poem". It seems as if you conjured up an awesome outline of a mighty centurions' head and never got around to giving him a body in which to conduct battle. I demand that this warrior be given flesh, blood, and a wicked keen blade!!

I want to say eight, or even nine at this point;- but since you left your behemoth wanting, I am forced to give this a five.




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