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Tide (Free verse) by fevriere
Luscious rain and light and, foreign, further-off.. half a milky orb caught in night's nets. It is dusk and the light is persistant but dying. That is the way things go as birds fly along the grain of the sky and not against or least, not until the earth or sky turns over from the season of cocoa to the season of sweet dirt.

Up the ladder: Hum
Down the ladder: Hurt

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Arithmetic Mean: 7.0
Weighted score: 5.2384057
Overall Rank: 4144
Posted: April 5, 2005 8:01 AM PDT; Last modified: April 5, 2005 8:01 AM PDT
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