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Tide (Free verse) by fevriere
Luscious rain and light and,
foreign, further-off..
half a milky orb
caught in night's nets.
It is dusk and the light is persistant
but dying. That is the way things go
as birds fly along the grain
of the sky and not against
or least, not until
the earth or sky turns over
from the season of cocoa
to the season of sweet dirt.
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Arithmetic Mean: 7.0
Weighted score: 5.2384057
Overall Rank: 4139
Posted: April 5, 2005 8:01 AM PDT; Last modified: April 5, 2005 8:01 AM PDT
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