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A Rendezvous (Free verse) by lrustagi
lying in the bed i thought
pondered unguarded, whirled through whims
searching the soul was my goal
the past uncoiled,turn by turn
"must've done","should've done","could've done" left me undone
don't intend a pun, but my head really spun
brooded over the future too
saw promising pixels of a pretty image
the time ahead, looked in good stead
amidst this all
also thought, where is sleep
caught in insomnia's mess,train of fancies seemed endless
the purpose of it all?
this calculation of foregone and future
a rendezvous with the inner soul, that after all was the ultimate goal
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Arithmetic Mean: 5.5
Weighted score: 5.023713
Overall Rank: 7474
Posted: March 7, 2007 10:59 PM PST; Last modified: March 7, 2007 10:59 PM PST
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