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The feeling (Free verse) by devina
I want you to know that I love you so. And if you think you´ll find a deeper love, then I think you´re wrong. If you want to know why, why I´m feeling so high. Cause every time you look at me, I feel so heavenly. My body is aching, shaking, It feels like I´m breaking. It´s only because, I love you so much. My heart is beating, and my head is spinning. It feels like it´s the lottery I´m winning. I want to dance, I want to fly. I want to fly high up in the sky. I want to scream, to see if it´s only a dream. I love you so much, Oh heavenly touch. My dream came true, and it´s all because of you!

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Arithmetic Mean: 5.5
Weighted score: 5.023713
Overall Rank: 7484
Posted: February 16, 2004 9:45 AM PST; Last modified: February 16, 2004 9:45 AM PST
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[n/a] lastobelus @ 217.82.1.186 | 16-Feb-04/3:36 PM | Reply
This love, it vibrates?
[n/a] deleted user @ 24.222.81.233 | 17-Feb-04/2:46 PM | Reply
How hollow is thine head? Sweetmeats und bread.
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