| Poem: Submit | Random | Best | Worst | Recent | Comments |
|
Lost (Free verse) by alvinb My heart seems not to beat
My body is without heat
A love, once a myth
Is lost inside this broken zenith
My soul full of sadness
My spirit out of madness
Then you came and add the numbness
I recall pain from your kisses
Up the ladder:
mission statement
Down the ladder:
Almost Alone
Votes: (green: user, blue: anonymous)
Arithmetic Mean: 5.5
Posted: January 31, 2008 7:52 PM PST; Last modified: February 11, 2008 10:13 PM PSTWeighted score: 5.023713 Overall Rank: 7479 Comments:
[4]
deleted user @ 63.127.193.79
|
2-Feb-08/9:49 AM
|
Reply
You need to proofread this. My vote would have been higher if you had'nt voted for yourself.
added - grammar
206 view(s)
|
||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||
