Lost

Member since 2006 · Posted 31 Jan 2008 · Edited 11 Feb 2008 · 2 comments

My heart seems not to beat My body is without heat A love, once a myth Is lost inside this broken zenith My soul full of sadness My spirit out of madness Then you came and add the numbness I recall pain from your kisses

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[4] deleted user 2-Feb-08/9:49 AM Reply

You need to proofread this. My vote would have been higher if you had'nt voted for yourself.

[5] Dovina 15-Feb-08/3:24 PM Reply

added - grammar