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Lost (Free verse) by alvinb
My heart seems not to beat My body is without heat A love, once a myth Is lost inside this broken zenith My soul full of sadness My spirit out of madness Then you came and add the numbness I recall pain from your kisses

Up the ladder: Obsession
Down the ladder: Emails

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Arithmetic Mean: 5.5
Weighted score: 5.023713
Overall Rank: 7465
Posted: January 31, 2008 7:52 PM PST; Last modified: February 11, 2008 10:13 PM PST
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[4] deleted user @ 63.127.193.79 | 2-Feb-08/9:49 AM | Reply
You need to proofread this. My vote would have been higher if you had'nt voted for yourself.
[5] Dovina @ 208.127.216.216 | 15-Feb-08/3:24 PM | Reply
added - grammar
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