poemranker ::Wash away my life by winniss

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Free verse № 154893

Wash away my life

Member since 2007 · Posted 10 Feb 2008 · 1 comment

Shadow on stone oh how you have grown. Exorbing feelings as you roam, held with in a darkness, forever alone. Your reflection so earthly, it's never very far, your spirit so distant it caress's every star.

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[4] Edna Sweetlove 25-Feb-08/6:35 PM Reply
This is a pathetic poem. I think you should post it at another website I sometimes go to: http://poetryaddicts.pcriot.com/forum/ - it would be much loved there as indeed would you.....