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Wash away my life (Free verse) by winniss Shadow on stone oh how you have grown.
Exorbing feelings as you roam,
held with in a darkness, forever alone.
Your reflection so earthly, it's never very far,
your spirit so distant it caress's every star.
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Posted: February 10, 2008 9:56 AM PST; Last modified: February 10, 2008 9:56 AM PSTWeighted score: 5.023713 Overall Rank: 7468 Comments:
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Edna Sweetlove @ 85.211.243.133
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25-Feb-08/6:35 PM
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This is a pathetic poem. I think you should post it at another website I sometimes go to: http://poetryaddicts.pcriot.com/forum/ - it would be much loved there as indeed would you.....
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