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Withering Blithering Blathering Wavering (Villanelle) by T. Jonathron Remp
Late, distant fog
Early morning bog
Smile, Smile, Punch, Pout
Tragedy strikes, you're out!
Mirror mirror on the subway
Will our love ever part ways?
Hark, ye trespasser of my Soul.
Dip, Dive, Submerge your Sins in my Bin
Lock the Key away in a Box
Lock the Box with another Lock
Lock the Lock with a Cinder Block
Trapped, fumes released, chemical reaction
Spastic drum machines flutter mindless melodies
Come, dance Minstrel with my Menstrual Mongoose
Come, cut loose before the Lynchers find you
Stand aplenty, gunned down, run down
Fool of the graveyard: Save your files on a hard drive,
not a smart card!
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Arithmetic Mean: 5.5
Weighted score: 5.023713
Overall Rank: 7469
Posted: November 30, 2009 11:43 PM PST; Last modified: November 30, 2009 11:43 PM PST
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