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I said no salt! (Free verse) by Freethinker1602
take what I say with a grain of salt
I came unglued
I said unglued
I put my heart out for you
let my veins bleed for you
I poured my soul out with my words
and then you threw them in my face
and used them against me, why me
take what I say with a grain of salt
a lowly fucking grain of salt
I came unglued
I said unglued
My anger boils on the surface
I can't hold it in
It's dieing to get out
hungers for a debt to be repaid
you brought it on, it's your fault
take what I say with a grain of salt
a lowely fucking grain of salt
I came unglued
I said unglued
I gave you my words
I gave you a piece of me
a piece of my life
you threw it all back at me
maybe I'm foolish, maybe my fault
take what I say with a grain of salt
a lowly fucking grain of salt
I came unglued
I said unglued
I hate you I hate you
you gave me unforgiveable anger
you put that in my heart
all I see is red, a blood lust
god you tore us apart
you did your best to drive a wedge between us
Because of you, I am empty
I'm so angry, i don't know what to do
I am unglued
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Arithmetic Mean: 5.5
Weighted score: 5.023713
Overall Rank: 7477
Posted: May 29, 2009 4:59 AM PDT; Last modified: May 29, 2009 4:59 AM PDT
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