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I said no salt! (Free verse) by Freethinker1602
take what I say with a grain of salt I came unglued I said unglued I put my heart out for you let my veins bleed for you I poured my soul out with my words and then you threw them in my face and used them against me, why me take what I say with a grain of salt a lowly fucking grain of salt I came unglued I said unglued My anger boils on the surface I can't hold it in It's dieing to get out hungers for a debt to be repaid you brought it on, it's your fault take what I say with a grain of salt a lowely fucking grain of salt I came unglued I said unglued I gave you my words I gave you a piece of me a piece of my life you threw it all back at me maybe I'm foolish, maybe my fault take what I say with a grain of salt a lowly fucking grain of salt I came unglued I said unglued I hate you I hate you you gave me unforgiveable anger you put that in my heart all I see is red, a blood lust god you tore us apart you did your best to drive a wedge between us Because of you, I am empty I'm so angry, i don't know what to do I am unglued

Up the ladder: Ad Infinitum
Down the ladder: A Rendezvous

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Arithmetic Mean: 5.5
Weighted score: 5.023713
Overall Rank: 7474
Posted: May 29, 2009 4:59 AM PDT; Last modified: May 29, 2009 4:59 AM PDT
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