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Wash away my life (Free verse) by winniss

Shadow on stone oh how you have grown. Exorbing feelings as you roam, held with in a darkness, forever alone. Your reflection so earthly, it's never very far, your spirit so distant it caress's every star.

Edna Sweetlove 25-Feb-08/6:35 PM
This is a pathetic poem. I think you should post it at another website I sometimes go to: http://poetryaddicts.pcriot.com/forum/ - it would be much loved there as indeed would you.....




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