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Lost (Free verse) by alvinb

My heart seems not to beat My body is without heat A love, once a myth Is lost inside this broken zenith My soul full of sadness My spirit out of madness Then you came and add the numbness I recall pain from your kisses

Paul S 2-Feb-08/9:49 AM
You need to proofread this. My vote would have been higher if you had'nt voted for yourself.




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