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Lost
(
Free verse
) by
alvinb
My heart seems not to beat My body is without heat A love, once a myth Is lost inside this broken zenith My soul full of sadness My spirit out of madness Then you came and add the numbness I recall pain from your kisses
Paul S
2-Feb-08/9:49 AM
You need to proofread this. My vote would have been higher if you had'nt voted for yourself.
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